THE CREATURE'S POV
I went away and have lived in the mountains for awhile. Things are super different. I actually ran into that stupid creator of mine.... ugh..... humans.... He seems to be smitten with that girl of his. I wouldn't know what that's like. No one loves me, they don't understand me, they just don't get me. I just want to be accepted, that's it. When I saw him in the mountains he tried to fight me. I expected it though and tried to be calm, without fail. I was very surprised at how cool I kept things. I told him how I felt though and gave him some.... conditions... that he needs to fulfill so that he won't lose the one's he loves. He deserves to know what I feel like though. He's abandoned me, so he should also be abandoned. I just want him all to myself, or for him to at least acknowledge me for the person I am, not the monster. But, on the bright side, I went into this village and even though everyone ran screaming from me, I found refuge in a small family. They are helping me learn and I love it, It's nice to feel accepted for once.
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you used a kind of modern speech to the creatures thoughts. It's new.(: But yet you still kept the creatures thoughts detailed and easy to understand. Good job.
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